16th May 2008, 12:44 PM
Sounds excellent - it certainly hits the nail on the head in my opinon. Just some grammar adjustments (sorry!)
"...below the countries (country's) average wage, and for most of those employed in Field (?should field be capitalised here or not?) archaeology, this is further complicated by intermittent (?availability of) work, (delete comma and add 'and') short term contracts, were (?where) conditions of employment are almost invariably and (?at) the basic legal minimum."
"...below the countries (country's) average wage, and for most of those employed in Field (?should field be capitalised here or not?) archaeology, this is further complicated by intermittent (?availability of) work, (delete comma and add 'and') short term contracts, were (?where) conditions of employment are almost invariably and (?at) the basic legal minimum."