25th May 2005, 04:03 PM
David,
Unfortunately I do have the time to comment in detail.
What is good is that there will be a clear statement of BAJRs aims.
As this is a mission statement it is not cast in tablets of stone and can be amended at any time by yourself. It is not a rule book or constitution but a statement of what BAJR is about. Therefore while I doubts about some of the precise wording ( I would omit the sentence one person can make a difference and BAJR is here to say).
I suggest you post the mission statement with the rider that BAJR is here to provide a service and that service is tailored to what people want and thus will be amended to meet changing circumstances.
Keep up the good work.
Peter
Unfortunately I do have the time to comment in detail.
What is good is that there will be a clear statement of BAJRs aims.
As this is a mission statement it is not cast in tablets of stone and can be amended at any time by yourself. It is not a rule book or constitution but a statement of what BAJR is about. Therefore while I doubts about some of the precise wording ( I would omit the sentence one person can make a difference and BAJR is here to say).
I suggest you post the mission statement with the rider that BAJR is here to provide a service and that service is tailored to what people want and thus will be amended to meet changing circumstances.
Keep up the good work.
Peter